Rough Cut- Feedback

When we showed our rough-cut to our teacher and some of the class, we got postitive feedback, they all believed the story line was good, and the contrast of black and white to show the past and coloured footage to enphasis the present was a good use of editing. We asked for some feedback on how to improve the music video and one point that was mentioned was to make some of the clips alot shorter and snappier. However the rough cut feedback was very good for our group.